Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's world, advertising is known as a key part of modern business. Most people attribute the high amount of selling rates to the power of advertisements. However, some people assert that this issue is the result of their real needs. What is the fact?
No one can deny that advertising has a great impact on people in persuading them to buy things which make them happier. Nowadays, because of new technology used in advertising, most of the advertisements are attractive to people, especially children. For instance, vivid colors are used in advertising to entice children into the products. As a result, they put immense pressure on their parents to buy everything that they want, regardless of their real needs, because they have a lot of toys. That is why you encounter high sales of toys.
Oddly, advertising is not only popular with children, but also interesting to adults. For instance, new goods such as cell phones introduced by advertisements try to tempt them to buy. As a result, adults likewise children are susceptible to influence of advertisements.
Some of the consumers definitely assert that not only is not advertising a major factor for persuading them to buy the products, but also this causes them to avoid buying those products since most of them are rubbish; this is why they are advertised via the media. Also, they say that their needs are fulfilled merely by real needs. What an absurd thing to say!
To sum up, despite the denial of this fact, advertising is the foremost motive in persuading people to buy the products in spite of being redundant. This issue can be continued by reasons of the high sales of essential goods such as bread, milk and so on.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...ible to influence of advertisements. Some of the consumers definitely assert that not on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, likewise, so, for instance, such as, as a result, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87586206897 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79651558291 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531034482759 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0680041891 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.375 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 2.91625615764 309% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215300230385 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724989341524 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375685724383 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115125617671 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279381883438 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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