In today’s world, different governments and international organisations are confronting many problems to deal with. What is the most pressing problem among them? How can it be taken care of?

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In today’s world, different governments and international organisations are confronting many problems to deal with. What is the most pressing problem among them? How can it be taken care of?

Submitted by Simthind on Tue, 04/24/2018 - 16:01

It is irrefutable that the advent of modernisation gave birth to many inventions for the ease of humankind, however, a significant upsurge can be seen in many problems as well at the global level. In my opinion, pollution is an alarming issue, if not jeopardising. Unfortunately, it is not only an issue in developing countries, in fact, developed nations are also a victim of it, it is need of the hour to examine the main causes of it, and for that, it is imperative to examine the main reasons. So, I will discuss them in subsequent paragraphs.

The most widespread reason for pollution is the pollutant emitted from factories, be it in the form of liquid or gas. The second factor that aggravates the situation is the deforestation that also contributes to environmental degradation. Moreover, a colossal augment in a number of vehicle on roads also is one of the major causes of pollution. Hence, it is evident why I am considering pollution as the prevalent one.

However, few steps could prove beneficial to eradicate this evil. Firstly, the government can make more stringent laws for manufacturers to use eco-friendly measures in their processes. Furthermore, educational awareness could help to restrain this vicious practice. Besides, international bodies should launch the programs to encourage masses at ground level to grow more and more plants. Above and beyond this, media, whether it is print or electronic must contribute to make people aware of the harmful effect of this issue.

From what has been discussed above, one can conclude that the situation that has stemmed from the pollution can be successfully remedied, provided that the aforementioned measures are taken. Its harmful impacts are indeed too dire to ignore.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, in fact, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 285.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14035087719 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09002306402 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4837877824 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6666666667 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115034176404 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0293273226358 0.0925447433944 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448076834053 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0640868592566 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032791498299 0.0609392437508 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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