In town and cities, the large shopping mall should replace the small local shop. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there is a growing demand of shopping malls instead of small shops in big cities and towns. Some people think that big shopping malls should be constructed to replace the small local shops, while others maintain that small local shops serve a peculiar purpose. This essay will discuss that why more and more large shopping malls should be constructed to replace small local town shops.
Firstly, there are myriad of arguments in favour of building big shopping malls. To begin with, a shopping mall comprises of multiple stories and provides space and housing for numerous shops of various brands. Moreover, a customer can easily access all shopping brands under one roof without moving from one location to another. As an example, on black friday a customer can save ample of time by easily accessing all shopping brands in a single mall. Therefore, to facilitiate customers and citizens more and more larg shopping mall should be built instead of small distant shops.
On the other hand, scarcity of big malls and abundance of local shops would require customers to move from one shop to another to buy their desired products. Additionally, various brands would be located at scattered places and people will have to move their vehicles from one place to another and in doing so they might either get struck in traffic or face parking issues. Hence, it is unquestionable that shopping malls save precious time and provide variety of buying oppurtunities to customers under one roof.
In conclusion, building or construction of larger malls instead of small local shops would assist the citizens to access variety of brands under one roof without encountering traffic issues. However, I opine that larger malls should be built as they would serve there purpose in the best interest of local population.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...g malls. To begin with, a shopping mall comprises of multiple stories and provides space and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10367892977 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49013669342 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511705685619 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8455595127 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.384615385 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400985226171 0.242375264174 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172390141566 0.0925447433944 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100343075966 0.071462118173 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265740995228 0.151781067708 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122565880661 0.0609392437508 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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