Urban sprawl is an increasing issue around the world. One way in which to solve this issue is to construct cities vertically rather than horizontally. Do you agree / disagree with this statement
The inundation of human populace has resulted in overcrowding of cities. Some people think that the best approach to address this issue is by constructing heighted flats and buildings, while others maintain that expansion of the city area is the best possible solution. This essay will discuss that why horizontal expansion is the best plausible option.
Firstly, horizontal expansion of city area seems to be the most appropriate method to accommodate exponentially growing population. To begin with, expanding and developing city area will flourish urbanization and also render more business opportunities at newly developed area. As an example, more business ventures will be introduced and will boost the national interest and economy of the country. As a result, it deems quite suitable to expand cities horizontally rather than vertical.
On the other hand, construction of skyscrapers and high buildings with numerous flats also comes out to be an alternate approach. However, proponents of this view are unaware of the fact the saturation of people would result in scarcity of basic necessities like schooling and hospitals. Nevertheless, this situation will emerge unemployment as a challenging issue as the limited growth of resources and offices would not suffice to meet the requirements of growing population. Hence, there seems no potential and positive aspects in growing and developing cities vertically.
To conclude, I opine that aforementioned facts provide plausible stance in favour of my arguments and there seems dire need to grow cities horizontally to address urbanization and lead towards generation of more employment slots.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...n of people would result in scarcity of basic necessities like schooling and hospitals. Neverthel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, nevertheless, so, while, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59920634921 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08768665734 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615079365079 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0876104252 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.583333333 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168166885586 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577007812252 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361419454455 0.071462118173 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952167016891 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362778346086 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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