Travel to study is overrated; we have brilliant scholars who studied locally. Is travel required for higher studies?
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about that the studied locally better than to study internationally. While it is possible to claim that those who study locally is cost effective and to understand national job market, my view is that the disadvantages outweigh advantages. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.
To begin with, I would like to state that if someone completed studied from international university they are having more social, economic and multicultural experience and moreover, multinational companies also preferred international students because they have diverse experience. To illustrate, professionally growth of these students is a much faster and they can explore more opportunities.
In Continuation to the above point, those who study in abroad, they have more opportunities and wide to work at Research and development, information Technology and Artificial intelligence area, and Furthermore, some Chief executive officer of big giant companies are other nationality people, for example, according to study of Stanford university, most of people worked in multinational companies are studied from internationally university.
Those who argue for local students are brighter having different view and say that it can actually be good good thing, Firstly, it is claimed that to study in abroad is very costlier and also they need to do part time job to pay the high amount of fees. But , in my opinion those who studied in abroad are more recognized as compared to locally students.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that idea of pursuing international higher studies contribute's in personal, Social and economic growth.
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Suggestion: part-time
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40072202166 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14222170912 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592057761733 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.352306031 50.4703680194 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.222222222 104.977214359 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7777777778 20.9669160288 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8888888889 7.25397266985 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257991860172 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110812704261 0.0925447433944 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672798877491 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14672181519 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435599177298 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 12.6369458128 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.11 53.1260098522 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 10.9458128079 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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