What is the best invention of the last 100 years: computer, antibiotics, airplane? Explain
In today's era, there is colossal upsurge in advance technology that changed ways of working of human kind. While Computer is most technological development in contemporary time whether some people believe that airplane and medical industry is most advanced. This essay will explain why computer is most advanced with compared to other technologies. The following paragraphs will explain both, merit and the disadvantages of stance taken with pertinent aspects ans examples.
To begin with, there are myriad of reasons that computer is most advanced technology in modern world. One of the most preponderant reason is that Computer provides the fast processing of data and to solve problems. In every field, Computer has mutation the advancement in technology like in education, medical and in aviation industry. To exemplify, according to research by stanford university, in last century when no computer is present, human need ten times more work compare to current time to complete any task. Hence, not only computer easy human life but also plays an vital role in medical and entertainment industry.
In contrary, there is another stratum of society who believes that airplane and antibiotics is most advanced technology. Firstly, airplane saved the human time and they can travel several miles in just few hours and interconnected the world. To elaborate, according to research by times people, medical advancement reduced the number of deaths with compared to manually procedure. Therefore, it is apparent that, antibiotics and aviation industry is most beneficial for people's.
In conclusion, computer is most advanced technology from the lat 100 years to save human time error and also with the help of artificial intelligence, most of the work done by automatically.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 453, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'aspects'' or 'aspect's'?
Suggestion: aspects'; aspect's
...vantages of stance taken with pertinent aspects ans examples. To begin with, there a...
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Line 3, column 575, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...computer easy human life but also plays an vital role in medical and entertainment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4440433213 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93251921815 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570397111913 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.65517241379 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8239731573 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.714285714 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0556884513769 0.242375264174 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0209374879297 0.0925447433944 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0214031214691 0.071462118173 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0385369315169 0.151781067708 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162591233044 0.0609392437508 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 53.1260098522 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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