Travelling to study is overrated. We have brilliant scholars who studied locally. Is travel really necessary for tertiary studies?
Education is being provided all-over the world and people have great inclination towards going abroad for getting some higher studies or certifications. Local education has already produced many brilliant scholars and professors who are serving well in the society but still people questioned about travelling foreign for studies does make any importance or it is the same as local student performs. This essay will discuss both sides with examples and reasons.
Our education departments have produced enormously brilliant pupils who are providing their services in different sectors of the country for instance; PhD, Engineers, Doctors are doing tremendous job in their respective fields. The tireless efforts of teachers, scholars and professors for the individuals's well-being are not hidden.
On the contrary, there is an increasing trend of people who leave country and travelling abroad for higher and especial education. This is also for the betterment of our society and country. These people get education from some renowned universities and colleges of the world and made the country proud. They yet come back to serve their countries .This is of higher importance if people go and get foreign education, hence makes country's literacy rate higher and good economic development on broader aspect.
In a nutshell, travelling for studies is of no harm and nonetheless it is a wise decision for an individual's well-being and for society's betterment too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, nonetheless, so, still, well, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 31.9359605911 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50220264317 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85123119017 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607929515419 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.538280769 50.4703680194 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.9 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233489856218 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910110885938 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819143779813 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157766612737 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762020220076 0.0609392437508 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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