In underdeveloped countries tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite as well Discuss your opinions and give examples

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In underdeveloped countries, tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite as well. Discuss your opinions and give examples.

For underdeveloped countries, tourism can be a blessing if it is properly implemented or else it is drawback if it is not properly managed. Both scenarios have their own advantages and disadvantage. This essay will discuss on both views with relative examples.

Firstly, if country implements proper infrastructure, facilities and other requirements of tourists then tourism sector can be one of the main source of income for the country. Tourism can create huge employment and also creates chances to exchange culture values with other countries. For instance, for many countries of Europe, tourism is one of the top most sectors for revenue. Hence, tourism can be helpful in economy if we have proper facilities for tourists.

On the other side, if country does not have proper facilities for tourism then it can be disaster for its citizens. Government can not utilize its natural resources in a better way and has to spend huge chunk of money to protect these natural resources. For instance, some of the African countries are the home of African lion which is rare animal. Still because of lack of facilities and infrastructure, these nations can not generate enough revenue from tourism and have to spend huge money to protect this endangered animal.

In conclusion, tourism can change country's image if it is implemented properly or else it can be capable to destroy country's overall economy if it is not managed closely.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, so, still, then, as to, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11914893617 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87091848176 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51914893617 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5767448451 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.25 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199636380067 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849117384358 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05931045433 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141830369177 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403516615466 0.0609392437508 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 68.5393258427 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 61.0 Out of 90
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