The violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree?
Recently, the phenomenon of increasing committing crimes by watching the related movies and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although these films are quite fascinating and provide inhabitants excited time as it regarded by substantial numbers of individuals both constructive and positive, others hold opponents views. I am inclined to believe that these criminal movies cannot prevalent the committing crimes as and the other factors can lead to these criminal activities.
From a social standpoint, observing the criminal movies can enhance the rate of criminal activities in nations. From my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the effects of exhibiting the violence films on TV or the other mass media. This survey showed that some crucial factors are hidden in these films that may encourage settlers particularly the youths to commit crime. Certainly, the people who perform the criminal roles are often rich and have glamerous lifestyle. Furthermore, they have an excited and interesting life though they face risks.
On the one hand, there are several arguments that these criminal movies cannot lead to criminal activities. According to the research undertaken by a tangible prestigious world-renowned university the other factors lead to criminal activities including poverty, the low rate of awareness, knowledge and information among populations, declining the number of academic citizens and increasing the violence behaviour among the youths. These such a violent films might be intersting but cannot lead to violence.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that watching criminal films have fewer effects on making violence behaviour among dewllers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71217712177 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97970422583 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575645756458 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5215719354 50.4703680194 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166147618079 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638285958121 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385597281903 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987352152689 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303633188942 0.0609392437508 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 12.6369458128 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 11.5310837438 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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