The violence portrayed on T.V and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree?
The media like movies, TV, and the news sets the tone for our cultural norms. In my view, exposure to violence portrayed on T.V and in the movies has a great impact on people especially children. I partly agree with the statement that people who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals.
In the world we live in today, watching media like movies, TV, and the news means exposing yourself to virtual violence. Everyone is watching more and more violence in the mainstream media and social media every day! Though the world is safer than ever before for human beings to flourish, violence is indeed in human nature. There is an uprising trend of reports of violence and explicit content on television.
As every human being is different so everyone behaves differently when exposed to virtual violence like seeing brutality such as tearing human bodies apart on news has a great impact on the minds of teenagers. Young people and children are more likely to behave aggressively and indulge in harmful activities. While some become less sensitive to the pain and suffering of other living beings, others become more fearful of the world around them.
So often kids don’t distinguish between the reality and fantasy so growing up thinking violence is acceptable can lead them to a path of criminal activities and war. To conclude, movies and TV have a great impact on the society with the negative waves especially to the teenagers. Viewing excessive amounts of violence in the media cause desensitization to violence which might lead to an increase in crime in our society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: V
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9776119403 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57194322607 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555970149254 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1146770225 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.166666667 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 7.25397266985 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355265779796 0.242375264174 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127844369373 0.0925447433944 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118063564531 0.071462118173 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213406710957 0.151781067708 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11996653827 0.0609392437508 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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