Nowadays, there is an ongoing debate that whether violent movies are affecting people behavior or not. Whether, some people believe that viewing violence on the screen of movies and TV will change their audience to become criminals, while others argue that people who watch these violent scenes are more aware. This essay will further elaborate on both sides and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
In the outset, there is the number of reasons in favor of my stance, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that Increasing number of crimes scenes in TV channels and movies will affect on people, especially on youth. Recent research, which was conducted in the USA, reveals that crime rate has increased from 10% to 50% because of watching violent movies. Therefore, why many people think that violent channels are affecting people mode.
On the other hand, some people think that these violent scenes could help to increase the awareness among people. People may understand the risk before happen. For example, some channels are telecasting episode regarding crimes and showing the punishment of that crime. Thus, some people are getting aware of these kinds of programmes.
In the view of arguments above, one can be concluded that the drawbacks of viewing criminal movies are more as compared to benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12385321101 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37361719343 2.71678728327 87% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610091743119 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0719144103 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.545454545 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275490523827 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960608136127 0.0925447433944 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825400846199 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152750388994 0.151781067708 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917917856682 0.0609392437508 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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