Nowadays, there is an ongoing debate on whether social media has the negative impact on social life or not. Some people think that social media has a negative impact on social life. Some people think social media has some benefits as well. This essay will further elaborate on both sides and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are innumerable of reasons why people think that social media has no negative impacts, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that with the help of social media people can cummunicate with family, even they are living far from them. For example, with the help of social media, some people do their business overseas as well.Thus, why many people think that social media has more benefits.
On the other hand, some people believe that social media has negative effects on social life. Some people always busy on social media even they are with their family. For instance, the percentage of people who are using social media is increasing day by day. Thereby, people think that social media has more drawbacks as well.
In the view of arguments outlined above, one can be concluded that the benefits of social media are prominent, but the drawbacks should be well handled. According to my point of view, I can be concluded that social media has more benefits than the drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84415584416 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24092781305 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480519480519 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5519629955 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.25 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233246041867 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135131955152 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944174477095 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168040229517 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827672116782 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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