In a war of ideas, it is people who get killed”. Does a common man suffer from a group’s ideology? Express your opinion.
Some people believe that common people have to bear loss in the clash of ideas whereas others argue on the opposite. However, both the views are true to some extent, in my perspective, foremost is more practical.
Different strong nations have different ideology: communism, democratic. Powerful country desires weak nation to be influenced and to follow their principle. When powerful democratic country and powerful communist country try to influence same weak country, people of weak country have to suffer in many ways. For instance, the war which is still in Syria is because of clash of allies of democratic nations and communist nations. During such war citizens are succumbed to even death.
Secondly, every people have their own principles and sometimes one does not like to try to understand others principle. As a result, this will impact not only themselves who were involved but also the normal person who does not know different ideologies. For example, when father and mother get divorced, even their children life suffer.
In a nutshell, different people have different school of thoughts and when different principles do not harmonise each other, there occurs a clash which affect themselves as well as the normal people who were not involved.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, whereas, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 203.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26600985222 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61307646347 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591133004926 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7436181886 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1818181818 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.25397266985 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1234286331 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451469442128 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324682864168 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763625499397 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299958082729 0.0609392437508 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.