We have entered a throw-away society and fill the environment with rubbish. What are the causes and what are your solutions?
Recently, the phenomenon of dirty environments and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although the ways of diminishing rubbish are beneficial as they regarded by a substantial number of individuals both constructive and positive, others hold the different views of their implementation. I am inclined to believe that the society needs some strategies in order to diminish rubbish as it could develop some brilliant aspects for its adherents.
From a social standpoint, the society with full of trash is can provide the nation with some noticeable and detrimental effects which are rooted in the fact of declining tourism and its disadvantages, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered some indications which affect the tourism industry. Thus, catastrophic ramifications of both poor culture and awareness to protect the environment apparently can be seen.
On the one hand, there is no doubt this problem has some solutions including instructing inhabitants in order to enhance their awareness, legislating some strict rules and fostering the culture by some television schemes. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious world-renowned university has asserted that the most significant way for preventing settlers to protect and clean their cities is getting familiar them with all merits and demerits of this issue. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of extracting waste in opened areas.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of encouraging citizens in order to recycle their waste.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, hence, if, so, thus, while, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58490566038 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21660430483 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637735849057 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0509763764 50.4703680194 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.0 104.977214359 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.9669160288 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0770424687713 0.242375264174 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285149711959 0.0925447433944 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0242372057934 0.071462118173 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0404426428893 0.151781067708 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282102647531 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 12.6369458128 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 53.1260098522 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.71 8.32886699507 129% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 55.0591133005 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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