What are adventures sports? Should these banned or not?
Human being is always concerned about their entertainment so that he/she would not be bored from his/her daily routine. For this, human always tring to search different sports, movies, play, music or music insturments etc. Where significant number of people think that adventures sports should be banned, some believes that it should not. This is a moot question and this essay will discuss about the same.
First of all, sports is a very good activity to keep you active, energetic and fit. Where sports not only make your body active but also enhance self confidence as well. With the help of sports, we can keep our body in shape. As a result, our body will less affect by the diseases and which improve health level and immunity as well. In short, its good to be a sportsman which utilize free time in good manner.
Secondly, its very tough to say, some people modified sport to some adventures sports, which utlimately can face dangerous affect of the same. Some adventures sports like raffting, bunging jumping can steal life of the person who are tying to play with these sport. We should think from the point of family as well and do not play sports which can take life of an innocent person. Its better to play safe so that it will not affect anyone in long run.
To sum up, on the basis of above mentioned point, I pen down and want to highlight that there is hair line difference between courage and danger. There is no benefits to play a unsafe sport. Government should not enhance these kind of play.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, in short, kind of, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64074074074 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21693506838 2.71678728327 82% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596296296296 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8484197326 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3125 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 6.9802955665 201% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214195956092 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718491436048 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888068944478 0.071462118173 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125952773439 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570611396487 0.0609392437508 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 12.6369458128 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.1260098522 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.9458128079 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.5310837438 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.32886699507 84% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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