The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some individuals opine that in order to reach the knowledge of the surrounding, the internet has become an indispensable part of today's world and plays a vital role in everyone's life. This essay will elucidate further regarding positive as well as negative side of the internet and its usage.
There are a myriad of reasons that how internet has expanded horizons to access the information around the world, but the most predominant one is the communication sector. In the era of upgraded internet facilities, it's not only increased the communication sector, but improves the research and education sector as well. If we talked about last two decades, it was impossible to talk and video chat at free of cost. Moreover, due to its positive impact, every single individual is enjoying the liberty to utilize it's fully. Consequently, it helped small business to expand further. Needless to say that, its helped to remove the different barriers also. For example, in the past few years, in order to get the facts for different products to buy, watch, review and compare anything, we had to spend a lot of time and efforts in the market but ecommerce websites like amazon helped customers around the globe, to save not only time but money as well. In short, it helps the mankind in different sectors.
Besides its numerous beneficial factors, it is having some drawbacks as well. For example, with the help of internet, we can get the knowledge of our bank accounts but some hackers misused the information provided online and they hack the bank accounts. There are a huge number of cyber crimes which occur daily where these kinds of thieves not only create different frauds but some people, hacked the official accounts of celebrities, politicians etc. as well. In other words, due to ill mentality, few cheaters, used these source of information for trespassing the borders, kidnapping etc. purposes. However, its affecting the investigations also because digital data can be tempered.
In conclusion, on the basis of above defined points one can conclude that no doubt the internet has increased the ways to consume and spread information significantly, but we must take required steps to secure ourselves from unwanted attacks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
... internet and its usage. There are a myriad of reasons that how internet has expand...
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Line 3, column 514, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...dual is enjoying the liberty to utilize its fully. Consequently, it helped small bu...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...helped to remove the different barriers also. For example, in the past few years, in...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Purposes
...respassing the borders, kidnapping etc. purposes. However, its affecting the investigati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in short, no doubt, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08695652174 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76484116083 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600543478261 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.0448725991 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109639485704 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301293429661 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367669741393 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0680178408832 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00549642565528 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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