Nowadays people are increasingly dependent on their smart phones. Is this positive trend? What are advantages or disadvantages of this dependency? Support your point of view with reason and examples from your own experience or observations.
Today society developing to digitalization in all sectors. So that users of smart phone increasing when comparing to past decay. In my view there are so many positive and negative trends, we can see following essay.
Firstly, the negative side of smart phone most of wider community become lazy to do their work and reduced the physical activity. For instance, most of people do online shopping so it eliminates the walking exercise. Therefore, which causes disease to health such as diabetes, cardio vascular disease and obsessiveness.
In another hand advantages of using smart phone which used to communicate eassily where ever in the world and become more transparency in media, government, banking etc. For example, nowadays more freedom given to media because of this smart technology made easier to reach update news immediately to people.
In conclusion, the both view have different aspect but while considering the usage of importance smart phone play major role in certain areas. I pen down, even for my communication and knowledge development smart phone is used. Finally, the smart phone has more advantages than disadvantage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oping to digitalization in all sectors. So that users of smart phone increasing when co...
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ed the physical activity. For instance, most of people do online shopping so it eliminates the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.5418719212 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 1207.87684729 80% => OK
No of words: 181.0 242.827586207 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34806629834 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.92707691288 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85818571888 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696132596685 0.580463131201 120% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 379.143842365 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0253745091 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.25397266985 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11730057493 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423420074924 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268518065968 0.071462118173 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667563826223 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159428186416 0.0609392437508 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 53.1260098522 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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