What are the benefits of living in big cities, as opposed to rural areas? What are the problems of rural areas and how can they be solved?
Nowadays, many people around the globe prefer to live in big cities due to the benefits that they offer, and the problems associated with rural areas. However, there are few ways to solve these problems. This essay will discuss what those problems are, as well as measures that can be taken to overcome them.
On the one hand, there are myriads of advantages to people living in metro cities. First and foremost is the availability of abundance of employment options. Secondly, the facilities such as healthcare and education are easily available and accessible. For instance, these cities have plenty of schools, hospitals and universities, thereby, making these places ideal to survive and thrive. Thus, it is apparent that these cities provide salubrious environment to its residents.
Furthermore, remote areas have their own side-effects. To begin with, they are not very well connected to other areas of the country. In addition to that, in some small villages, even basic amenities such as electricity, education, medicines etcetera are not available. Owing to these, people are moving to major cities.
While the problems associated with rural areas may seem intractable, there are solutions available. First solution is to provide easily accessible transport modes and roads to these places. Another option would be to open schools and colleges, thereby, making people educated. Transportation and good education system might solve the problems caused.
This essay discussed the merits and demerits of living in metro and remote cities respectively. While the issues are evidently clear, there are measures that can be taken to alleviate them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43629343629 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73272350618 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586872586873 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0598901387 50.4703680194 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.2222222222 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3888888889 20.9669160288 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26475299853 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640892699741 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657848015865 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130991044956 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880349087206 0.0609392437508 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 53.1260098522 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.68 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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