What are the benefits of living in big cities, as opposed to rural areas? What are the problems of rural areas and how can they be solved?
The benefits of living in developed cities, as opposed to regional areas which was always debatable, has become more controversial in recent days. It is believed that people live in regional areas struggling with a number of serious problems. However, I will explain the reasons for my stance and thus will provide a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad reasons why people prefer to live in big cities, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that cities provide easy access for all facilities ranging from transportation to education to health services at a reasonable price. For example, a recent study shows more than 75% of residences live in cities were migrated from regional areas due to the facilities that cities offer. In contrast, people live in rural areas face a number of issues in their daily life, but the most significant ones are lack of transportation facilities, inadequate health and education facilities and infrastructure facilities. Hence, it is clear that most people prefer to live in big cities than rural areas due to the benefits that cities offer.
Approaches to deal with the setbacks originated from this problem are many, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that government should actively involve in solving these problems by developing infrastructure facilities and providing a quality education and health facilities. Therefore, it is clear that government involvement plays a crucial role in solving these serious issues.
In the light of above discussion, it can be concluded that although people prefer to live in developed cities, the government involvement in solving this issues should not be overlooked.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, for example, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25925925926 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90578156947 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492592592593 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.1651695449 50.4703680194 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 104.977214359 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241251652498 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101944058798 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676663839027 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139045002002 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450188532653 0.0609392437508 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 12.6369458128 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.1260098522 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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