What are the effects of doing sport on the human’s overall health and lifetime?
Recently, the phenomenon of the corresponding impacts of performing sports on the people's health conditions and their period of lives has sparked a heated debate among the population. Although this issue has a number of beneficial effects on the lives, some people do not consider them. I am inclined to believe that these activities can be plus as they could develop some brilliant aspects for their adherents.
From a social standpoint, there are several advantages of allocating a particular time in order to do sports. These benefits are rooted in the fact of boosting the health circumstances and lead to have a long life. From my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered these effects. Firstly, sports enhance the process of metabolism and it lead to distribute the food to all parts of our body by blood. Furthermore, doing sports can be diminished the risk of an array of disease in particular cardiovascular ones. Sports increase the heart activities and this occurrence lead to the increasing of the speed of moving blood.
In addition, another paramount influence of performing some activities as sports on our health and having long period of life is keeping fit. Sports help dwellers to have appropriate weight and it decline the rate of obesity. Ultimately, the other significant factor is creating excitment. Sports are one of the best ways to get away from difficult situations and condition that loads of people have in their sedantry lifestyle. These activities have a strong impact on reducing the stress which is unfortunately common in the a considerable number of populations.
In conclusion, while practicing and doing sports have a number of effects, I profoundly believe that the most fundamental one is providing ideal health conditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
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Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
...nhance the process of metabolism and it lead to distribute the food to all parts of ...
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Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'declines'?
Suggestion: declines
...llers to have appropriate weight and it decline the rate of obesity. Ultimately, the ot...
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Line 5, column 524, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...stress which is unfortunately common in the a considerable number of populations. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21355932203 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03213470188 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572881355932 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7188672014 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.533333333 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17110842318 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561434889048 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042666336534 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111347691862 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206334543763 0.0609392437508 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.