What are the greatest inventions of the 20th century among medicine, aeroplane and computers, why?
The potential for new advancements and inventions in the fields of health and technology to modify and improve our living conditions is considerable. However, all of the above-mentioned modalities are essential for our society, but out of these, I would like to go with medicine as I feel medicines, in particular, are of paramount value because health is a significant necessity of all individuals.
Over the last few decades, medicines advanced so effectively that these days we have the cure of several ailments which were the major cause of morbidity and mortality fifty years ago. With today’s therapeutic drugs we are able to prevent numerous diseases which were not feasible before; therefore, it improved our life expectancy to a greater extent and also, enhanced our quality of life.
Although computers and aeroplanes are also an essential part of today’s life we can only use these if we are physically and mentally healthy; for instance, a person suffering from fever will always require medicines nothing else, and computers, aeroplanes etc cannot attract his attention until and unless his fever subsided.
In short, discoveries in the pharmacological field as compared to other areas enhanced people’s wellbeing and enabled them to enjoy a healthful life to their maximum potentials with the necessary will, strength and power, however yet a lot is to be discovered in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ng conditions is considerable. However, all of the above-mentioned modalities are essentia...
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Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
..., however yet a lot is to be discovered in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, i feel, in particular, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36322869955 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10681759205 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677130044843 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.5024630542 180% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.6797006248 50.4703680194 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 199.333333333 104.977214359 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.1666666667 20.9669160288 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.25397266985 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0427783052338 0.242375264174 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0195493449337 0.0925447433944 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287995334999 0.071462118173 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0240484782509 0.151781067708 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296476982488 0.0609392437508 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 12.6369458128 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.0 53.1260098522 32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.54236453202 223% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 10.9458128079 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.32886699507 124% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.94827586207 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.3980295567 162% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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