What are the pros and cons of staying connected on social media for 24 hours a day
In my personal opinion,the topic of staying connected on social media for 24 hours a day is a controversial one.I personally believes that there are many advantages and disadvantages in social media which are directly affecting the life of human beings.In the following paragraphs i will endeavor to explain my point of view in much more minute details.
One of the primary reason that has been stated by the people who have same mindset as me is the social media plays a good role in making connected with friend and family.Now a days all people can able to know each other through this media for example we can connect with the friend who was in the abroad.Another reason that is widely popular among the masses is that through social media we can able to spread the important news between the local people for example while the floods happens in Kerala with in few hours all the people get alert about the opening of the dam in early mid night.
Subsequently the cones in social media is that through the social media the lot of fake news are also spreading very quickly,so if is really making lot of problems to governments and ordinary peoples. Another major cons are misusing the information from social media by taking the profile pictures from the face book and creating the another fake accounts and use it for many terrorist activity.
Based on the above reasons,it is safe to say that my personal opinion is validated beyond belief.After careful
consideration of various reasons that were observed from various sources,I feel vindicated in my choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, while, for example, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84701492537 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60599269536 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578358208955 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.5024630542 259% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 152.33436907 50.4703680194 302% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 259.8 104.977214359 247% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.6 20.9669160288 256% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.25397266985 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.33497536946 431% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313529971669 0.242375264174 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147592539702 0.0925447433944 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944678604634 0.071462118173 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13085957729 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114631386242 0.0609392437508 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.2 12.6369458128 223% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 53.1260098522 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 10.9458128079 208% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.74 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.94827586207 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.3980295567 223% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.5123152709 266% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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