What are the pros and cons of staying connected on social media for 24 hours a day.
In today's world, social media helps to stay connected to family and friends. But in recent times, people starts using social media fractiously. It is popularly known that overuse of anything violates its creed. This essay will discuss the pro and cons of staying connected on social media 24 hours a day.
To begin with cons, recent times have been a golden era for online social media as plenty of exciting and new tools launched to stay connected. Social media use has blitzed due to tools like facebook and whatsapp. People are now connected day and night via virtual world due to which their interaction has tumbled in real life. To vindicate my point, according to a survey, people in USA spends average of five hours on social media per day. Due to this habit their time for other things has crimped.
On the other side, social media has numerous benefits also. To embark with benefits, people are now close to their friends and relative and can share important life moments with them via social media. Social media has paved new ways of business commodity as well. As with the help of social media, business can interact directly with customers on real time basis and can help them with advertisement with nuance capital expenditure. All in all, social media has helped human life in many ways.
To succinct, everything has good and bad effects. So, it is individual responsibility to manage time between social media world and real world. Social media can help to great extent if used with purpose and timely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81297709924 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31704539802 2.71678728327 85% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568702290076 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2548963489 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1764705882 104.977214359 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4117647059 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23529411765 7.25397266985 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355193474863 0.242375264174 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126780256012 0.0925447433944 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112661744057 0.071462118173 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238718052971 0.151781067708 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123986808187 0.0609392437508 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 12.6369458128 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 60.5 Out of 90
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