What is the best invention of last 100 years, the computer, antibiotics, the airplane and explain why?
Past plays an important role in development of future. Some people believe antibiotic and airplane are the greatest breakthrough, where as other believe computer is the best invention so far. This essay will discuss why computers are the best invention mankind has ever come across.
Firstly, computers are widely used to store large data, and saves environment. For example, computer saves data on its central processing unit, as a result we don't have to use papers at work-using paper at work could lead to environmental pollution and deforestation, which can harm our ecosystem. In short, computer saves environment from pollution.
Secondly, computers are great help to humans at work and are reliable. Computer has made complex task easy and can be used in various field. For example, scientists can use computer to solve complex equations, additionally programmed computers can help server customers in banks - as ATM and in supermarket - as self checkout machines. Therefore; it can be said that computer assist humans and are dependable.
To summarise, this essay discussed how computer can save environment and help humans though complex task while being reliable. In my opinion based on the facts, computer is the greatest invention of past 100 years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in short, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 200.0 242.827586207 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.355 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88394699663 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.0327754615 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.25 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.25397266985 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0791179471262 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371160903802 0.0925447433944 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649134219477 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0649797839535 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698195311993 0.0609392437508 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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