What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in a developing country?
Times are changing rapidly and so are the long-held on modern man. A recent controversy that has further flared up among elites and intellectuals is all notions is whether tourism in developing countries has negative and positive should be discussed in forthcoming paragraphs. Personally, I prefer to keep up a stance on the significance of tourism.
To begin with, it must be acknowledged positive, but the most predominant is that learning a new culture from different countries beneficial for us because when we meet to multicultural people in the tourism industry it's increasing our knowledge and skills ability. For instance, I say that normally in foreign English is a dominant language in the world, which boosted up the confidence level and learning something new life. These reasons shed enough lights on tourism.
However, the above discussed convincing that, I feel compelled to consider that a strong role of tourism, but the most conspicuous is that waste of money and expensive tourism, lots of international students doing study in other countries, such as Australia and Canada, leaving way from parents and friends cause for sickness, and college fees, part-time study, not much time for rest and relax an becoming Health problems. A recent survey conducted by Cambridge University that tourism 25% a most. This evidence declares loud and clear that health can't be overlooked.
It indeed without any saying that learning the culture, but the dominant influence of health should not be ignored at any cost.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, for instance, i feel, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24897959184 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88217604867 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661224489796 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 113.628341535 50.4703680194 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 128.6 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130590494515 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470060702903 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418095804947 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0555610384896 0.151781067708 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447806511374 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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