What do you think are the strengths and weakness of the education system in your country. Use your own experience to support your idea.
The importance of the education system, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of the type of various education systems has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on our university, college, and employment in recent years. it can be agreed that there are lots of strengths of the education system in china, but it also has some weaknesses. this essay will elaborate on both the positive and negative impact of this issue and will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous ways to explain why chinese education system has plenty of advantages, but the most conspicuous one is rooted in the fact that chinese education institution use the intensive courses and strict writing assessment to educate the students, which helps chinese students to develop their solid knowledge and learning skills. Thus, it is apparent that the intensive and strict education system has quite a few strengths to learn knowledge effectively and efficiently.
Nevertheless, opponents of this trend tend to believe that chinese education system also has disadvantages, which this system might not develop the creativity and oral presentation skills for chinese students. For instance, according to new research from Harvard university, 90% of Asian students received the worse results when they faced the creative tasks and presentation assignments. Therefore, it is obviously true that the education system in china also has weaknesses such less creativity or poor presentation skill.
In view of arguments outlined above, one can be concluded that strict and intensive method is prominent, although it has a number of drawbacks that should be well handled by the government and education organization.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 5.75862068966 347% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45487364621 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98051118713 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56678700361 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.6614463481 50.4703680194 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.1 104.977214359 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7 20.9669160288 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129715167906 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058168305403 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371448535127 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738551605072 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324186810389 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 12.6369458128 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.1260098522 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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