In this days, there is a debate on a previous opinion which they could build us smarter, productive and produce goods and services and happier, after the appearance of computers. Although Skeptics and some other people have an opposing viewpoint, the computer has brought many advantages with itself for the human. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss why I disagree with this view.
To begin with, there are various reasons to deny the Skeptics claim in terms of computer's productivity. At first, although after the advent of the computer the human every day become lazier than before in physical activities, the time-consuming works became faster and easier. For example, the time calculations in banking have become more speedy by advanced computer systems.
In addition, it seems that by working with computer humans use their intelligence less than before. However, the human uses its intelligence to develop and create new computer systems every day. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by THN University researchers in 2017 shows that a significant number of new and advanced computer systems in the industries and medical reduced and decreased the rate of errors and faults. These advantages make the people happier than before.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about the computer, my personal sentiment is that science appearing the computer the speed of works has become faster and easier and also the accuracy in calculations enhanced and increased.
- computer technology has had more of a negative than a positive impact on society.How far do you agree with this statement? 56
- Soon retirement of workers can create job opportunities for young people. discuss 88
- The only effective way to deal with unemployment is to introduce rapid urbanization. How far you agree? 88
- Nowadays, people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. Do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience. 80
- Most people in what are known as the developed nations have homes full of gadgets and labor-saving devices, from vacuum cleaners and dishwashers to the latest in computer technology. Some people claim that despite all these labor-saving devices, we seem t 80
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32916666667 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74529585028 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620833333333 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7047390356 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.272727273 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.25397266985 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236723399248 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872218194854 0.0925447433944 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526646499539 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129206763171 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549281940043 0.0609392437508 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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