Whether design of building will have a positive or negative impact on people’s life and work?

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Whether design of building will have a positive or negative impact on people’s life and work?

From ancient times, the design of the building remained a topic of debate among the people. Many people believe that it has a positive effect on life and work, while others opine the opposite. My opinion coincides with the former notion. This essay will elaborate on the viewpoints and hence lead to a reasoned conclusion.
There is a myriad of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that a well-built building puts a colossal of impact on the mind of a person. Not only it generates the feeling of proud but also provides reassurance of safety. For example, people working inside a well-architected multistory building feels more confident and relaxed as compared to those that are not built properly. Thus, nevertheless, to say, the way a structure is constructed has a great impact on the people living or working inside it.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that a spacious design of a house or building can provide many advantages to the residents. The structure that provides proper exposure to sunlight and air can help in preventing many diseases. For instance, a report has stated that thirty percent of people are deficient in vitamin D, due to a minimum or no exposure to sunlight. Hence, a well-planned design can help to a great extent to reduce this problem. Therefore, it is quite clear that designing of the building has become indispensable for the overall wellbeing.
In view of the arguments outlined above, it can be concluded that the way a building is designed can help people to be healthy and safe. Hence, the advantages provided by it are too dire to be ignored.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 110, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'put'?
Suggestion: put
...erant one is that a well-built building puts a colossal of impact on the mind of a p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, to a great extent

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84172661871 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84048784583 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546762589928 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.949303304 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.125 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248634786192 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687898163109 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06026683375 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141257645128 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498554567489 0.0609392437508 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 12.6369458128 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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