Whether the design of buildings will have a positive or negative impact on people's life and work?
In this contemporary era, people concentrate more on the design of the buildings. There are myriad of reasons why people thinking about the design of the buildings. The essay will discuss how building designs can give positive and negative impact on people's life and work.
Firstly, buildings can give plethora of positive vibrations to the people's life. Nowadays, there are many architectural design of the buildings have been introduced according to the archeological theories. For instance, the various interior designs in the home and workplace can give pleasure to the mind when people are in a stressed condition. The various features including the wall paintings, space of the building , moreover, the aquarium and prayer room may give a positive vibes to the people's mind.
On the other hand, there are some designs which can impact people more negatively. A few buildings are made without proper space or air circulation inside home, they may only focused on the structure or the outlook of the building. For instance, the building with insufficient space to accommodate number of people can affect badly to their work life as it does not provide privacy for the job and life.
To summarize, the design of the buildings have a major impact in people life as it can affect their personal and professional life. In my opinion, the building should be properly designed as it has a greater impact among people' life and work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
... plethora of positive vibrations to the peoples life. Nowadays, there are many architec...
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Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he wall paintings, space of the building , moreover, the aquarium and prayer room ...
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Line 3, column 481, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'vibe'?
Suggestion: vibe
...ium and prayer room may give a positive vibes to the peoples mind. On the other h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, so, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06751054852 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70775093371 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514767932489 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 379.8 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 8.0 1.56157635468 512% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2368861373 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.083333333 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4823905102 0.242375264174 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199595584086 0.0925447433944 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134385735802 0.071462118173 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.327740011105 0.151781067708 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100022635791 0.0609392437508 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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