Whether design of buildings will have a positive or negative impact on peoples life and work?
The importance of building designs which was always debatable, has become more controversial. The substantial influence of building design has sparked a controversy over the potential impacts of this trends in some nations in which it can affect the life and work or people. it can be agreed that building designs has some positive impacts, but some people claim that it has some negative impacts as well. this essay will elaborate how building designs impacts a person life and work.
At the outset, there are many reasons why building designs should take in consideration. building should be design in a way that it will attract people and make people safe. For instance, in Singapore you can see almost 80% of the country are buildings. you can see high-rise buildings in different structures that would encourage people to go and see them. The designs of building will boost the economy of that country in terms of more tourist would come. Therefore, building designs can play a vital role to every other countries.
Nevertheless, some people adopt the opposing view and tend to believe that there is no need to consider the design of a building. As long as they can build a building that can be a means of their living. As an illustration, often people forget to take in consideration the design as they think it's not that important. they don't believe that it will contribute a factor to the people who is working or living in that building.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that people must consider a design for the building so that it can encouraged more tourist and workers, although it is expensive to have a stunning design.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 6.10837438424 311% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 5.94088669951 252% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81468531469 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67128519351 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3612072571 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 7.25397266985 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435684199461 0.242375264174 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152202763742 0.0925447433944 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910428293693 0.071462118173 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256246864042 0.151781067708 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965196231613 0.0609392437508 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.