Which should require more financial support from the government? Health or education? To what extend do you agree or not. Use your experience.
In recent decades, both health and education are attracting a great deal of attention due to its substantial impact on human development. Many people believe that government should support both the fields. I strongly agree with the statement that government should support health more as it plays an important role in everyone's life . This essay would further elaborate why government should spend on health with justifying reasons and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To start with, there are several reasons why government should pay and support for healthcare. Firstly, thanks to the government financial benefits and health schemes which are contributing well being of many low-income individuals who cannot afford the hospital expenses. Further the health care departments and ruling governments has to work together to initiate and take these schemes to remote areas where there are no hospitals build. For example, in remote areas, government has to build more and more hospitals for rural people as they cannot commute to the urban areas for treatment. It is clear from example that government should be more focused in supporting and improving health benefits of its citizens.
Furthermore, those people who diagnosed with dreadful diseases, it is difficult for them to go undergo treatments because cost to treat these type of diseases are very high. Government has to provide free treatments for chronic diseases and provide prescription medicines at free cost. It is considered that governments has to increase financial budget for health care to improve the medical facilities in countries. Moreover, in some developing nations, hospital facilities and practitioners' medical skills do not satisfy the international requirement. This means that individuals must go to abroad for a more advanced treatment and have to pay the hospital fees by themselves.
In conclusion, governments are highly recommended to upgrade the hospital's facilities and build more and more hospitals in remote areas for rural people.
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We cannot deny the fact that…
We cannot deny the fact that education is a crucial part of our system today. It has surpassed all other daily needs except food and clothing. On the other hand, one has to be physically and mentally fit at the same time. This essay will discuss the importance of both the heath and the education and which among these require more financial support from the government.
To commence with, developed countries have changed their living style based on years of education. Education not only helps in economic growth but in individual growth as well. It can uplift the upcoming generations. Also, actions speak louder than words, and our words are defined by the way we think which ultimately is the result of our upbringing and schooling. For instance, we come across many examples of how a son of a farmer or a carpenter is now a Navy officer.
On the other hand, health is important as well. We cannot continue working with bad health. We can get a loan from the bank for our education but not for our heart operation. We can survive without education, it is important but it is not inevitable. Education can be delayed and there is no defined age for learning. There are examples where people complete their matriculation at the age of 75 and even 90. But heath once ignored, can lead to pernicious effects.
To conclude, I strongly believe that the health sector needs financial support from the government not everyone is capable of taking care of themselves, and every life matters. All other factors elevate our life only when we are healthy.
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Suggestion: than
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Suggestion: .
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended upgrading'.
Suggestion: recommended upgrading
... In conclusion, governments are highly recommended to upgrade the hospitals facilities and build more...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, as for, as to, for example, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1207.87684729 143% => OK
No of words: 313.0 242.827586207 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50479233227 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91682367644 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546325878594 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 379.143842365 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2084305759 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.866666667 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241770397486 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093243093924 0.0925447433944 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636257539951 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149272018084 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708310781937 0.0609392437508 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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