World is becoming forest of buildings and it is becoming difficult to find trees everywhere. What is the main reason of global warming. Can you suggest some ways to eradicate global warming.
The environment around us constitutes of all those particles which influence the survival living beings on earth, for example human beings, flora and fauna. But now lots of buildings are making continuously a cutting the trees. Now i will discuss main reason for global warming and some ways to eradicate the global warming.
To begin with, deforestation is the main reason for increasing the global warming, nowadays world has become forest of buildings, whereas trees are used for many purposes, like home furnitures, making paper and rubber, due to which people are cutting more trees. Thats why global warming is rising day by day. Moreover, global warming increase the temperature of earth which effects on living beings.
Apart from this, there are many ways to decrease the global warming like people should grow more and more trees, which will become helpful for raining. Besides this, government should also make efforts to decrease the global warming, like government should make strict laws against the people who contribute in global warming. Furthermore, People should use public transport for travelling instead of private vehicles due to which will decrease global warming and rush of transport from the roads and it will also helpful in saving the fossil fuels.
In conclusion, it can be said that nothing is impossible, likewise, this problem can be solved by contribution of people and government and it is necessary for life of all living beings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, whereas, apart from, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19831223629 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53740554312 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552742616034 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7041855592 50.4703680194 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.2 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3 7.25397266985 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258799801733 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112209436686 0.0925447433944 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109359100174 0.071462118173 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155615642547 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733261873607 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.