The world government and organization are facing a lot of issues Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants on our planet Give the solution

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The world government and organization are facing a lot of issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants on our planet. Give the solution

The world government and organization are face numerous problem which was always debatable had now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is hazardous while other reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate the negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reason which will further explain this argument, but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that the government and organization faces the main problem are pollution and corruption. Pollution is increasing day by day in the world. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that the global warming rises very rapidly, because people are throwing garbage and other non useable thing in open space, which are generally non-biodegradable and may cause rise in pollution. Hence, it is apparent why many are against this trend.
Steps to deal with this problem are many but the most significant ones are not complicated. Besides, government should make strict rules and regulation regarding pollution. They arrange the seminars and provide awareness regarding pollution. Primarily, they punished the people who are creating the pollution.
According to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the problem of environment pollution are controlled by the humans can be successfully addressed, provided that the above stated measures are taken.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, may, regarding, so, thus, while, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 5.75862068966 330% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4512195122 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89930884933 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605691056911 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5423895965 50.4703680194 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.153846154 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129344302087 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424113742171 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593009525226 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718772026344 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353886464471 0.0609392437508 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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