Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the Western countries. According to you what solutions can be proposed by the government and individuals?
Recently, the expansion of xenophobia in Western countries has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "what steps must be taken to tackle this challenge?". Whereas it is a widely held view that government must be liable to face this issue, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the society standpoint, xenophobia is bound up inextricably with developed countries, which indicates it leads to both political refugee and racism. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018 demonstrates the relationship between foreigner and racial discrimination as well as an exponential increase in fear. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of civilization is correlated positively with not only terrorist but also different culture.
Within the realm of psychological, without the slightest doubt, xenophobic attitude attribute to individual, in that it would come down to stress, depression, and anxiety. A salient example of such attribution is war victims, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take ideology for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint xenophobia expansion problems. Likewise, hardly had they confined their attention to mental state, foreign country, and even schools. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of education system.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that both individuals and government should be accountable to solve this issue. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, likewise, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1207.87684729 136% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84341637011 5.00649968141 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22348039404 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 139.433497537 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690391459075 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7361412289 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.307692308 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117668878137 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0305401881925 0.0925447433944 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430601323369 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656055062188 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433013030996 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.59 11.5310837438 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 55.0591133005 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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