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Should people take responsibility for solving problems that affect their community or nation in general?
We were created to help one another become better in whatever it is we are doing. No one was created to work alone, or to figure out everything alone. We all need each other to be better at whatever it is that we find ourselves doing. The government cannot possibly attend to all situations and problems. They will always do their best to tackle as many problems as possible but, they won't be able to do it all. That is where we the citizens come into play. We should not just sit down doing nothing because we are not in power. A country, state or community can only perform better if the citizens...
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Sentence: That is where we the citizens come into play.
Description: The tag a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by the
Suggestion: Refer to we and the
Sentence: We will be working together and this promotes greater relationship amongs individuals.
Error: amongs Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: We should be able to think and come up with ideas to help the government make our nation a bettter place to live in.
Error: bettter Suggestion: better
Sentence: We just can't sit down, critizing the government and expect anything good to happen.
Error: critizing Suggestion: No alternate word
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Score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 27 15
No. of Words: 459 350
No. of Characters: 2067 1500
No. of Different Words: 204 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.629 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.503 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.557 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 134 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 62 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.611 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.259 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.287 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.468 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.175 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5