Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, we are in a world of information explosion. Information, skills, and technology are developed and accumulated quickly. As a result, how to manage such huge amount of them and try to work with the their help are pretty important, resulting in the most competitive world we have ever had. In these highly competitive era, we are forced to work quickly and risky, with the fear of losing games. However, the most successful work should be most perfect, without any mistake. As a consequence, I disagree with the statement. In my opinion, accuracy and perfect are more curcial than speed.
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Sentence: As a result, how to manage such huge amount of them and try to work with the their help are pretty important, resulting in the most competitive world we have ever had.
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Sentence: In my opinion, accuracy and perfect are more curcial than speed.
Error: curcial Suggestion: crucial
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