Human being, by nature, craves for being successful, particularly in his career. Given that, finding the approaches that ensures getting promoted in the workplace is of utmost interest for people, especially in the modern era which the competition between people has gotten more severe and close. A question that may arise in this topic is that whether it is better to work quickly with risking inevitable consequent mistakes or to work slowly to avoid any mistakes. Although there are few advantages for working slowly, such as having a gauranteed outcome for the job which is very crucial in some careers, the merits of working fast overweight those of slow working.
The first aspect that deserves to be outlined is that in order to be a highly successful person in the workplace, one should be a fast to be outstanding. Promotions will go to the persons who make risks to demonstrate significant performance. In order to get promoted one needs to be outstanding. Risk averse workers end up being a mediocre staff in their jobs because they do not do anything special which distinguish them from others. For instance, a secretory who does not make a mistake will not be promoted for sure when there is another secretory who does all of her tasks much faster and as a result attracts her boss' attention.
Apart from the point mentioned above about getting promotions, one cannot overlook the fact that nowadays it is obligatory to work fast in some careers, it is not an option anymore. The pace of changes in the world has increased dramatically in the recent decades and the company owners and employees require to do their tasks fast in order to be able to keep up with the competition between rival companies. Consequently, the employers are also forced to work much quicker in comparison to the past. By the way of illustration, the broker who works in the stock exchange market has to make dicisions and act fast because the prices of the shares are changing rapidly.
In a word, owing to the causes and comparisons between risk takers and risk avers people in the previous paragraphs, it appears reasonable to safely draw the conclusion that one of the most essential requirements of being successful in works is to do works quickly and take risks of making mistakes.
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especially in the modern era which the competition between people has gotten more severe and close.
especially in the modern era in which (or where) the competition between people has gotten more severe and close.
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Sentence: By the way of illustration, the broker who works in the stock exchange market has to make dicisions and act fast because the prices of the shares are changing rapidly.
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