If given an opportunity to travel back in time, I'll want to meet Mahatma Gandhi without any second thought. As He is one of the key personalities among the great souls who bring the independence to India. He is an inspiration not only for me but also for millions of others through out the world. Also there are many other freedom fighter whom I admire a lot but in case of meeting one of them I'll definitely choose Mahatma Gandhi for reasons like his virtue of sticking with the truth, Love for his motherland and persuasive nature. Which I'll explore further.
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Score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 369 350
No. of Characters: 1682 1500
No. of Different Words: 197 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.383 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.558 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.569 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 109 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 50 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.357 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.774 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.364 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.62 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.253 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5