integrate essay
In this set of materials, of both the author and the professor discussion medical research performed on animals which’s called vivisection. The author states in favor of use animals in experiment , however the professor is for more that not ethically to use animals for experiments.
According to the reading, The author states that reduce of human suffering, it possible to keep animals suffering to minimum by using anesthesia, but keep them in health and clean condition, in addition there is no good substitute for animals experiments, other technique can be using to test the effective and the reaction of the drugs on animals, to be good guide of human, because they share same basic function and same some genes such as human and chimpanzees share about 99% of genes, moreover the germ theory and that diseases which comes from microorganism was proven by experimenting on animals. For example, penicillin, insulin.
On the other hands, the professor opposes animals experiment for several reasons. The first reason is many drug discovered without test on animals such as, quoin 9, ether use as anesthesia. The second reason is some drug if tested on animals, might not have been development. For example, morphine.
Third reason is there’s plenty substitutes can be used to test the effective of the drug such as, human tissue.
All in all its murdered to experiment on animals, no matter is that?
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Sentence: In this set of materials, of both the author and the professor discussion medical research performed on animals which's called vivisection.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to discussion and medical
Sentence: According to the reading, The author states that reduce of human suffering, it possible to keep animals suffering
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to it and possible
Third reason is there's plenty substitutes can be used to test
Third reason is that there's plenty substitutes which can be used to test
Sentence: All in all its murdered to experiment on animals, no matter is that?
Description: The fragment its murdered to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace murdered with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
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Not on the right format.
The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Don't need to reiterate the contents of reading passages or as less as possible.
Don't need a conclusion.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 16 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 12
No. of Words: 232 250
No. of Characters: 1139 1200
No. of Different Words: 126 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.903 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.909 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.648 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 82 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 64 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.091 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 20.874 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.727 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.37 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.642 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.09 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4