What is the most important decision that you have ever made? Give specific detail and examples to support your explanation.
I always have trouble in making decisions. Growing up, I remember being second guessed by my parents on virtually every decision I made or at least that’s how I remember it! However everyone has one decision that makes a big changed in his or her life. For me the most important decision that I have ever made it. is when I chose my major in the college. Is to be dentist .in fact, there was many majors I was thinking for them, but in the end I decided it for several reasons.
First of all I love to help people; therefore I believe our society needs to learn how to take care for their health and teeth . For example, making health programs at schools or any public places to teach them how to clean their teeth.
Moreover i strongly believe in a dentistry the knowledge and the science comes with the new every day. And thus I can gain more information such as, implant teeth it wasn’t teaching in the past, however some other major still the same knowledge for many years.
Overall, when I decided this major, I know that by decided this field not only I would improve my life, but also i will be able to contribute to the revival of my country’s health development. This is why this decision was important to me.
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