It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
The Neighborhood we live in is important part of our lives. We go around neighborhood all over the day. Some people of our neighborhood would agree with building of new movie theater. Others disagree. In my view, I oppose this plan for a couple of reasons.
The first reason is that by building a movie theater, there will be a lot of traffic around our neighborhood. As a result, it will be always a problem for parking our cars and others. For example, I remembered when I went to visit my aunt, who lives beside a huge movie theater. I had been searching for a place to park my car for more than half an hour until I found a park far away about 2 minutes walk. As you can see, it won’t be a problem if there is no movie theater.
The second reason is that, it will be a lot of noise. Many people are going to come and spend a lot of their times in this theater. So, it will be crowded and noisy all the time especially at the weekends. For instance, one of my friends complains to my about the noise they suffered due to presence of a movie theater in their neighborhood. She said that they sometimes could not sleep at night due to loud sounds they hear. This experience made me oppose this plan.
So that’s why I believe that it’s not a good idea to build a new movie theater in our neighborhood. Not because it will bring traffic but also it will be noisy. In conclusion, I believe that planning to build a movie theater in our neighborhood will be opposes from all.
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