It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
A new restaurant in my neighborhood is always welcome because in that area where I live needs a good restaurant. Although, some restaurants do already exist farther from my locality, I believe it would be a great help for the residents if we can access good food within a walkable distance. Many people nearer to my house are working and very often they depend upon the food from reatsaurants due to their busy schedule. In addition, restaurant is a place where many people will visit to dine, hence it may help to boost the business of my neighborhood, as there is an art center that needs to be...
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Sentence: Many people nearer to my house are working and very often they depend upon the food from reatsaurants due to their busy schedule.
Error: reatsaurants Suggestion: restaurants
Sentence: It may make the area crowdy but the crowd is going to benefit the people of my locality.
Error: may Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: crowdy Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Words: 487 350 (Don't need to list reasons in the introduction paragraph. )
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 487 350
No. of Characters: 2253 1500
No. of Different Words: 218 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.698 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.626 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.68 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 148 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 104 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 74 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 30.438 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 15.803 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.812 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.354 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.535 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.101 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5