People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The education is important in any socity. The number of universities and colleges ripedly increase because the need of educational people in many fields in the couminities. Since the world become more technology, the people tend to attending college or university. The requrements of college people in jobs and position improvments in companies are reasons for people to attend universities.
The first reason is that many jobs are required a university degree to get this jobs. For Example, in a computer company, any postion need a specific skill in coumpeter programs. Consequenclly, this company want a person who have knowologe in many coumpeter programms and that will become with person who get a computere degree, since he absulloutly studies spesifice subjects in this major. Moreover, the people whom have university degree will envolve the production for any company in which they work. They will devolope their company by there ideas and the Knowologe that they earn from their stadying in the university.
The second reason is that the people would be to improve theirself and their positon. Getting a high postion in any company does not deponed only in the number of years which the person serves in. However, the university degree can help to get a good postion and a high wage. Thus, the person does not have a good education would not get a good job or position.
In conclusion, people attend the university for vary reasons but the main purposes are that getting good jobs and postion improvments in companies. Whatever the reasons of attend the universities, the nuturial humen being would to improve themselves and achive their goals.
Sentence: Since the world become more technology, the people tend to attending college or university.
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Sentence: The first reason is that many jobs are required a university degree to get this jobs.
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Sentence: For Example, in a computer company, any postion need a specific skill in coumpeter programs.
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Sentence: Consequenclly, this company want a person who have knowologe in many coumpeter programms and that will become with person who get a computere degree, since he absulloutly studies spesifice subjects in this major.
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Sentence: They will devolope their company by there ideas and the Knowologe that they earn from their stadying in the university.
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Sentence: Whatever the reasons of attend the universities, the nuturial humen being would to improve themselves and achive their goals.
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Sentence: The education is important in any socity.
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Sentence: The number of universities and colleges ripedly increase because the need of educational people in many fields in the couminities.
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Sentence: The requrements of college people in jobs and position improvments in companies are reasons for people to attend universities.
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Sentence: For Example, in a computer company, any postion need a specific skill in coumpeter programs.
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Sentence: Consequenclly, this company want a person who have knowologe in many coumpeter programms and that will become with person who get a computere degree, since he absulloutly studies spesifice subjects in this major.
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Sentence: Moreover, the people whom have university degree will envolve the production for any company in which they work.
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Sentence: They will devolope their company by there ideas and the Knowologe that they earn from their stadying in the university.
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Sentence: The second reason is that the people would be to improve theirself and their positon.
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Sentence: Getting a high postion in any company does not deponed only in the number of years which the person serves in.
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Sentence: However, the university degree can help to get a good postion and a high wage.
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Sentence: In conclusion, people attend the university for vary reasons but the main purposes are that getting good jobs and postion improvments in companies.
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Sentence: Whatever the reasons of attend the universities, the nuturial humen being would to improve themselves and achive their goals.
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