People learn better from those at their own level-such as fellow students or co-workers-than from those at a higher level, such as teachers or supervisors.
I firmly agree that with the statement that people learn better from those at their own level. Nevertheless the impact of the teachers or any one from the higher level can not be denied completely. Yet, the people are more likely to spend a lion's share of their daily time schedule with their fellow students or co-workers, which might have a greater impact on people's learning. Moreover, the following discussion may shed some light on my meticulous observation to prove it to be plausible.
First of all, people usually spend most of their time in schools, colleges or offices. Hence, they ...
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Sentence: I frimly agree that with the statement that people learn better from those at their own level.
Error: frimly Suggestion: firmly
Sentence: Furthermore, people are used to learn from the competetion and co-operation those are very normal in any educational or official environment.
Error: competetion Suggestion: competition
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