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People recognize a different between children and adults. what events make a person an adult?
As all we know adolescence is after the childish period. Physically, it happens in boys sometime about fifteen years old and in girls around eleven. In my country people by one ceremony are distinctive from childhood. In addition, there are a numerous conditions that help people to recognize themselves as adolescent. I will substantiate my claim through the paragraphs as follows.
Their body begins to change and a lot of hormones start new activities. In my country, people celebrate the time of entrance of one to adolescence. These ceremonies are done in schools. As my country is religious, ...
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Sentence: Growing children are really one aspect of adolescence.
Description: The fragment really one aspect is not usually preceded by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
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Score: 25 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 373 350
No. of Characters: 1801 1500
No. of Different Words: 200 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.395 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.828 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.765 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 123 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 92 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.955 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.002 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.364 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.274 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.471 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.077 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5