Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways, or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation (buses, trains, subways)? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
At first glance, it seems very difficult to make a conclusion about which choice is more advisable. Because both the two choice have their own benefits, yet that doesn’t mean they are all same to me. After some consideration we can see that under most circumstances, improving the public transportation will do more good than improving the roads and highways. I’ll Arguments for my point listed as follows.
One of the primary reasons for my attitude is, Especially in the big cities, the public transportation system is one of the biggest problems, probably the biggest one. Because particular...
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Sentence: All in a word, Taking into account of all these factors, we may safely reach the conclusion that the improving the public transportation is a wise choise since it will raise the citizen's life standarts and make the cities more viable
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