sandeep kaur

About me

wants to acquire 7.5 bands in IELTS exams.Please correct my essay and help me to correct my mistakes.

I am from

canada

Gender

Female

Level

Beginner

Member for

10 years

My essays:

• In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. 63