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The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in five countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.


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The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in five countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below describes international tourist arrivals, in millions, in Brazil, Egypt, Malaysia, france and USA over a period of fifteen years, from 1995 to 2010.

The first interesting thing to observe is that four out of five countries developed their tourism with increasing number of arrivals in the given period, while in the USA arrivals started to decrease slightly from 2005. In fact in 1995, tourist arrivals in the USA were higher than in the other countries with 70 million , while in the same year France had 30 million, Malaysia 20 million and Brazil and Egypt were about at 10 million arrivals.

Another noteworthy aspect is that in 1997 tourism arrivals in Egypt over ...

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Sentence: Another noteworthy aspect is that in 1997 tourism arrivals in Egypt overtook Brazil's one and they went up staidly to 15 and 12 million by 2010.
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