The table below gives information on internet use in six categories by age group.Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate.

Essay topics:

The table below gives information on internet use in six categories by age group.
Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate.

A glance at the table given reveals the popularity of six activities done by people at different ages using the Internet.

It is obvious that online games is considered as the top activity by people under 20, with 81 out of 100 teens playing games online. Its popularity reduces as people getting older and just about a third seniors over 70 years old play online games. A similar pattern can be seen for the download activity, which figures decrease from about a half to 15% by the 40s and then further to a negligible 6% by people aged 70 or above. In stark contrast, while none of the teenagers use the Internet for the product research, a staggering 70% to 80% of Intrnt users from the remaining age groups do such activity.

Getting news and product purchase see medium popularity by people at any ages, having about two third of people doing these two activities online except teens and 70s groups which have just about 40% of them are interested in online shopping. People finding, meanwhile, is the least popular activity. The figure remains about 30% at all times and even see a mere 5% by teens.

Overall, people have different preferences on online activities. Teens prefer online games most, whereas seniors prefer doing product researches. Getting news and online shopping are the popular activities by people at all ages.

Votes
Average: 9.3 (3 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, third, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84782608696 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46664324994 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595652173913 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6446814935 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.363636364 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0708832656121 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0306576122074 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059165372727 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0657389294878 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07644064228 0.0819641961636 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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