You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below Summarise the information by selectin

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

The chart illustrates the amount of medals in Olympic games for different countries.There is a three different type of medals for each country.

First of all, in this chart USA has a most successful country relevant to number of medals.As a gold medals, USA won approximately 1,000 Olympic games as a winner.And also they have more than silver(nearly 500) and bronze medals (nearly 400) despite of rest of the countries.

Overview, most second successful country is Soviet Union when check out the chart.They have nearly 400 medals as gold and almost 400 medals as a silver and bronze.Soviet Union is most approach country to USA as a winner.But still there is a huge wide of range distinction between USA and with the other countries.The other country is almost have a same successful sport life.Their number of medals are almost same.

Eventually, when see the chart is clearly show to according to number USA has a big different and accomplished sport life more than other country.And Soviet Union just fallow the USA.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n Olympic games for different countries.There is a three different type of medals for...
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...ul country relevant to number of medals.As a gold medals, USA won approximately 1,...
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... relevant to number of medals.As a gold medals, USA won approximately 1,000 Olympic ga...
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...imately 1,000 Olympic games as a winner.And also they have more than silvernearly 5...
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...s Soviet Union when check out the chart.They have nearly 400 medals as gold and almo...
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...lmost 400 medals as a silver and bronze.Soviet Union is most approach country to USA a...
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...ost approach country to USA as a winner.But still there is a huge wide of range dis...
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...etween USA and with the other countries.The other country is almost have a same suc...
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...r countries.The other country is almost have a same successful sport life.Their numb...
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...lmost have a same successful sport life.Their number of medals are almost same. Ev...
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...entually, when see the chart is clearly show to according to number USA has a big di...
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...shed sport life more than other country.And Soviet Union just fallow the USA.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00584795322 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88806011267 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53216374269 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.976860407 43.030603864 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 214.0 112.824112599 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.75 22.9334400587 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 5.23603664747 253% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153399045638 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108371832145 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416246943031 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108371832145 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416246943031 0.0819641961636 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 13.2329268293 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 61.2550243902 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.3012195122 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.67 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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